my Family publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only about one thing
or person at a time.

My family

In my family there is 5 people and one pet. 

 My dad is called  Harlen   is a    kaitaia glass worker   and he Lives in Mangonui. 

 My Nans name Ann she works at Bloomfields and she likes going fishing with Roy.

 My  other  Nans, name is  Diane  she hunts  anything to eat.

My dogs name is Tubby   and he likes  Bones  and he likes  playing and he is very bad because he scratches and bites.

My brother's name is Nate  he likes  play fighting with me and  Against   me.

  My  mum's name is Vinnie  her job is cleaning how much money does she earn? she earns       $500.

Reflection
Two stars and a wish are... my writing and punctuation are good and a wish is putting my brother and mum before my dog.