WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only about one thing
or person at a time.
My family
In my family there is 5 people and one pet.
My dad is called Harlen is a kaitaia glass worker and he Lives in Mangonui.
My Nans name Ann she works at Bloomfields and she likes going fishing with Roy.
My other Nans, name is Diane she hunts anything to eat.
My dogs name is Tubby and he likes Bones and he likes playing and he is very bad because he scratches and bites.
My brother's name is Nate he likes play fighting with me and Against me.
My mum's name is Vinnie her job is cleaning how much money does she earn? she earns $500.
Reflection
Two stars and a wish are... my writing and punctuation are good and a wish is putting my brother and mum before my dog.